Rosie, your newspaper is very good and nice, I love it, but even so you should put a price on the header and maybe for the author, you should Italic the footer so it doesn't mistake as the text. You have a really good picture, you did very good on spelling and grammar so very good job. ^^
Rosie, your newspaper are very creative. But there isn't the price for the newspaper and that might confused others. Even if it a free version, you should leave a space to write the price. In my point of view, I think your newspaper are too much writing and only 1 picture. that might cause teenager to get bore. Other than that, your newspaper look very good.
i think you poster is really good i can read and see the picture, it very creative. the things you need to improve is i can't see the eagle is really hard to see
Rosie, your newspaper is very good and nice, I love it, but even so you should put a price on the header and maybe for the author, you should Italic the footer so it doesn't mistake as the text. You have a really good picture, you did very good on spelling and grammar so very good job. ^^
ReplyDeleteRosie, your newspaper are very creative. But there isn't the price for the newspaper and that might confused others. Even if it a free version, you should leave a space to write the price. In my point of view, I think your newspaper are too much writing and only 1 picture. that might cause teenager to get bore. Other than that, your newspaper look very good.
ReplyDeletei think you poster is really good i can read and see the picture, it very creative. the things you need to improve is i can't see the eagle is really hard to see
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